Dos vidas
Dos vidas se encontraron
Dos vidas se amaron
Dos vidas se encontraron
Dos vidas que nunca se separaron.
El odio los quiere atrapar
Más no lo puede alcanzar
El odio los quiere atrapar
Más lo que se aman no se separarán.
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mis primeros poemas cortos, principalmente en un tono romántico esperando que sean de su agrado
Dos vidas se encontraron
Dos vidas se amaron
Dos vidas se encontraron
Dos vidas que nunca se separaron.
El odio los quiere atrapar
Más no lo puede alcanzar
El odio los quiere atrapar
Más lo que se aman no se separarán.
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Isabel Elizondo Mora: Llore por el final, pero es una historia bien llevada con muchas faltas de ortografía pero se entiende imagino está en revisión , espero leer otras mas
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Kamil: La trama esta exelente
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Kyle: Love it in all honesty. Slightly longer than I had assumed but it’s great. There’s just some conflicting words used in the story.
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Mystery : I'm so sorry I forgot the name of the chapter I was kinda specifically writing a rewrite on. Ive read about 3 so far. And I really like chapter 2. The way your writing is so perfectly said but also hidden with so much meaning, honestly is impressive. You have so much potential in the way you write. ...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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