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Keona

"This story details the struggle of a women who is just trying to survive. Desperation and hardships are all she knows. The good times are few and far between. Life is rough and after years of systematic abuse Keona snaps. After ridding the world of one less monster,she enters into a dangerous liaison that leaves the people closest to her dead, and her mind in shambles. When she comes to herself the only things left are the hallucinations and cold white walls. A few years go by and Keona, with the intention of changing her life, finds herself back in her old haunts. She meets new people and possibly a new love. Unfortunately, when people try to turn over a new leaf, opposition pops up at every turn. Old enemies and new temptations show up and try to keep Keona from becoming who she is meant to be. Will she be able to fight the voices or will they swallow her whole? Read on to find out."

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A Womans Trouble

"Some parts of the story are hard to read. Not because it's bad, but because it's detailed and sad. Keona's story is heart wrenching, from her being beaten and betrayed, to trying to get it right. This is not usually the kinds of books I like to read but it pulls you in. Great job on that! I'm curious to see where it goes, seeming as how you haven't finished it yet. Hopefully you keep updating with new chapters."

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Well done

"I cannot praise it enough. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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