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Emotional roller coaster.....got me swooned for real!

"Initially I thought it's just a simple story about a ordinary girl's life (well it is without doubt) but as the story progressed I was left flabbergasted. The story revolves around the life of Adela (FMC), who once innocent got into a polar opposite life of Anton, her husband (MMC) which was an absolute whirlwind of emotions. Anton's a dark, twisted character whose flagrant behavior left her both hopeful & hopeless at the same time. After getting married to him, her life turned upside down, for which she wasn't ready but still tried to match with him & fit herself in. He always had his pretexts ready about why he does what he does and justified himself without giving a damn about how his wife, Adela thinks or feels. Also, the same goes for his mother, he treated her the same way like his wife. Things continued like this for 6 yrs of their marriage until one day when she realized that she's had enough & she was genuinely sick of his unchanging behavior towards her. That was when Anton realized for the first time his wife's importance in his life and set on a mission to atone for his wrongdoings. They really came to terms with their relationship & things were going perfectly fine until Adela got pregnant. To make the matter worse, Anton refused to believe that the child is his & that was the last straw for Adela. She left him with their unborn child because he couldn't stand the fact that according to him she cheated on him (f**king hypocrite who f**ked God knows how many women even while being married) & got pregnant. He also threatened to make her abort the baby & finally divorce her so that she could leave him forever. He's such a b***ard! He broke her heart for umpteenth time that she even lost count of it. Anyways, it comes with a HEA so I'm glad about that. Thank you Author for this amazing story. Tbh, at times my heart wasn't working properly because of the extreme emotion I was having but I still kept reading no matter how much I wanted go inside the story & throttle Anton with my bare hands. God! He's so hateful!! "

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Intense

"Wow. For Anton really took me through it. It’s one of those books that just digs in and doesn’t let go. Adela and Anton’s story is messy, intense, and so painfully real. There were parts that honestly felt like a punch to the gut . like I was right there feeling everything with them. Andreea’s writing is so raw and vivid that some scenes almost hurt to read, but in a way that makes you keep turning the pages. It’s such a feel-good story with some bad rollercoaster moments but that’s what makes it stick and the ending does tie everything up with a bow. If you’re in the mood for something that’ll make you feel a lot, this one’s worth picking up"

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For Anton

"This story was hard to read at times. I just wanted to shake her into waking up and stop being used and hurt by him. I love that the straw that broke everything was her child. I think it made her finally realize that she had something more important to love than just him. I think he realized that he did love her once she left and didn't return. For him to go after her in the end was beautiful because he seemed like he finally changed. I'm glad they all found happiness at the end. Great job author 💞🩷💞"

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For Anton

"Lovely story!"

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Beautiful story…wonderful ending

"I’d loved everything about this story, it is beautifully written and I love that in the end they were perfect for each other. The ending was amazing when she left, but the closure and happy ending was wonderfully warming. Thanks you for a great story, absolutely timeless."

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Emotionally charged mind-blowing venture

"This deeply written, thought provoking story is full of self-reflective conversation that should touch and force the reader to re-evaluate their own life story. It's more than a work of fiction: it's a work of desire, need, fear, self-reflection, anger, loss of innocence... an emotional catharsis that will be hard to top."

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