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On thin ice

"I loved this story. It was well thought out. I believe you could put more into it, or even a sequel to finish it off. Well done. I wish you you all the best."

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On Thin Ice

"An enjoyable sweet romance with some drama, a lovely story "

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Ice hockey and love

"The story of a couple destined to win but fighting adversity to do so. A strong love story with suspense of will she won’t she make her dreams come true."

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On thin Ice

"Living it so far. Hope karma bites Savannah in the ass. Few typos but good story. Can't wait to read more"

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