What is your opinion?
Xallia Keys
"Quite the short story but it's full of passions and emotion."
Elwood
"An absolutely beautiful story. I do not normally read this type of story but yours is a combination of Love story, Drama, and Sci-fi and I seemed to be drawn in after the first paragraph. You have great style and a real knack for story telling. Keep at it! I think you could become a professional novelist if you so choose. A previous person mentioned your grammar as being poor. I disagree. I think it gives a certain something to your novelette. The characters sound Alien or from some mysterious Country where English was not the native language. Anyway, good luck with your writing."
Wow! You are an artist! :)
"This is a beautiful story. My only advice is to bookmark www.online-spellcheck.com. It helps me. :)"
