What is your opinion?
Excellent
"Really great story! Well written, no obvious spelling errors or bad grammar! "
Skating On Thin Ice
"Although I enjoyed this book it was quite confusing and frustrating as there was a lot of repetition both in content and timeframes. It was essentially an inspirational message throughout with some uplifting quotes but the repetition did make it awkward to read at times. "
Needs some improvement
"The story is nice, but there are quite a few rehearsed texts so before i read the chapter i already knew what was coming, and sometimes two chapters had the same timeline like the chapter has been rewritten and the first was not deleted. It was a little confusing"
Alright story
"The plot of this story has potential, but it repeats constantly and is all over the place. It doesn’t flow how it should. I almost gave up on this story but stuck with it and it would have been a good story if it wasn’t for those issues. She is also supposed to be a fierce girl trying to make it in a mans game but you made her a whinny person with no self strength who always doubts herself. No one would have made it that far if they had that much self doubt. The relationship was all over and there wasn’t really knowing where they stand at some areas because you stated one thing but later it was something else and the same scenes repeated."
