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Poemario

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Summary

Son bienvenidos al espacio donde digitilalizaré mis poemas, si comentan que opinan de ellos lo agradecería

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
15
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Sueños desechados

Bailando al ritmo de mi corazón

Paso a paso

Segundo tras segundo

Mis movimientos tan pulcros

Aquel momento donde uno pensaba que llegaría a resurgir solo quedó despojado de emociones

"Solo soy yo" me digo mientras me siento un ser etereo


Pero aquel sentir y el ser están tan finamente cortados por los hilos del destino

Ese deseos que quiero tanto

¿será tan palpable para el resto?

Mi existencia y la vida están cortadas por un muro que para muchos ojos es invisible

Todo esto mientras se escucha una canción que con el tiempo fue más y más olvidada


Encerrado en una carcel de madera eternamente

El único pensar que existe en mi mente pierde lentamente fuerza

Mis pasos antes pulcros pierden levemente velocidad

El tiempo que tuvo mi "existir" se acabará

La último que pude escuchar fue el crujir de mi manivela.

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