What is your opinion?
Great start
"The start of the story has enough intrigue, heartbreak and affection for a good romance hockey story. I am intrigued where the story will go. "
Icebound Retrieval: The Central Attacker's Ace
"So far, so good. I'm excited to see what instore next. I'm thrilled and rooting for a great twist. The author's writing is good (I see more potential) and the way how the point of view switch from each other to make the story aligned from where it left off. I hope the author will complete this novel as early as possible but no pressure. Really love to read this one straight. Though waiting for the next chapter really thrilled me & keep on guessing what will happen next. Keep it up author."
So far, it makes me feel excited.
"Though this is a self-review, I am not bias with how I rate it. So far, the story makes me feel excited to read what the next chapter has to offer. The plot is shocking to how Amara caught her boyfriend, Austin cheats on her. I am also thrilled as to how the plot will go from there and what twist will occur. As per the writing style, it's comforting to read via point of views of the main character vs third person. Still waiting for other reviews and feedback because I still believe there are still room for improvement in my writing style. I rate it as 8 over 10. I am confident that the technical writing aspect is good. However, there is no perfection so I still rooting for other feedback so I can still do better."
