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Return to Westover

"Excellent novel. It can help you bring similar skills to towns or community areas that are or were a repeat of Wesrover. Excellent structure to the story always keeping you engaged with each element. "

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Return to Kincard

"Nice novel with a different twist"

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Return to Westover

"What a wonderful story about small town America and its people. Very refreshing with a bit of drama, mystery, romance, intrigue and everything else thrown in. Loved it! But saying that, some editing, punctuation and use of words are in order. Thank you! makapueo65 "

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Maggie

"A thoughtful plot. Different story line. Welcomed."

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Return to Westover

"This was a beautiful story I loved the story line and the the connection of the characters. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Return to Westover

"Great book.i love it"

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Very Well Crafted!

"I am only a few chapters in, but so far I find the writing style has an easy, yet calm flow to it. I am very interested and excited to see what happens..."

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Return to Westover

"A very good story about a small town with lots of history. Interaction between the main characters and existing townspeople was very enlightening. It was interesting how technology was woven into the story."

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Westerton

"Enjoying what im reading. Can picture what im reading "

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Fatema

"A different theme really liked it "

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Interesting read

"Really interesting read. I really loved how detailed the story is; I've never read a book that is able to create such a great picture of somewhere. I feel that I understand so much about 'Westover'. The structure flowed quite well, I found it very interesting. I'd recommend focusing on character development and potentially less characters, halfway through the story I had forgotten a lot of the characters and their purpose. I understand it was a short story however, I felt there could have been more to the plot, doesn't have to be anything dramatic or a twist but maybe at the end something to make it more exciting. I had noticed quite a few grammatical land spelling mistakes which can easily be sorted with a proof-read. An amazing writer however and a great short read."

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