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"I have rarely read a story that involves two sisters like this. They are the MCs and they’re literally the opposite of each other. Although they get annoying at times, their effort to understand each other is commendable. I thought it was just a normal grocery store but guess there lied many more stories. Good work! "

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"I'm new to Inkitt and this is the first story I've read here. Hope this review is helpful. Firstly, I was attracted to the story by the cover. So you get points for that. It's not a genre I usually read. When I started reading Love Ya Sis, I had no expectations. Once I started reading it held my attention. Halfway through I had to know how it ended. Although I couldn't visualize the sisters (more description of their appearance would be appreciated), I heard their voices clearly. The Narrator is right, they are both annoying. It was easy to read and constructed well. The Author didn't drown the reader with useless details and did a good job of slowly building the tension. You know there will be a twist but you don't know which way it will go....until it happens. I was dreading a Stephen King ending but I was pleasantly surprised. The ending was neat and tidy, with no loose ends. With horror, you don't have to explain everything anyway. The Narrator's comments are a nice touch. I'm curious where you are going to take "Taste". Only one chapter is posted and you've successfully made me feel irked. I foresee something gross. "

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