Brenda

"Will definitely continue with this series. Absolutely wonderful read of love , friendship and how it can overcome the evils and hardships you face. It blends royalties with the common folk, and speaks of relationships that are pure and steadfast. These 3 children are so young yet so full of knowledge, its amazing. "

Great

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Exciting

"I should say I've only read the prologue but I think this will be a very exciting tale. It will be very interesting to see where this goes. There are slight moments when some of the sentences do come across a bit like stating instead of showing. The sentences seem separate and don't flow on to each other. I like that it doesn't necessitate that the three children will meet, it leaves a bit of intrigue to it as to where it will good. They are three children with very different and their paths could all go very different ways. I'm sure it's going to be a very interesting tale."

A Kingdom to Follow

"I really have to say that I was pleasantly surprised by your book. I really love how real and honest your characters were. I was a little confused with the time jumps. At first I thought they were all ten, but then you said it was three years later and they were still ten. I also got really confused because your tenses kept changing. And there were a lot of grammatical errors. I would definitely buy this book, but like everyone else's on this site, it needs a little TLC. Can't wait to find out what happens to Winston, Lillian and Vincent!"

Kingdom Tales

"This is a well thought out, promising tale of true friendship. The story is full of great visuals and details and feels ripe for a younger audience, perhaps even the same age as the main characters. If so, I'm sure the series will become a fan favorite. The book as written could be cleaned up a bit - the time jumps threw me as well, and forced the writer to essentially re-explain what we've already seen. I'd also caution against giving away too much plot in dialogue and letting these vivid boys and girls a chance to "show" us who they are. Fun read!"