Inkitt
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Love it:)

"Great piece of flash fiction, short and sweet. With a big plot twist at the end that I totally wasn't expecting!!!! I love your characters, and you have some really beautiful prose. Really sweet and heart warming, thank you for sharing:)"

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Unexpectedly Touching

"I really liked the concept behind this story; short and simple, it got right to the heart of things, and kept me guessing what would happen until the very end--an ending that, I find, was very touching. Hope to see more in the future. :)"

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