What is your opinion?
Love it
"Great concept ! Really nicely punctuated (creates complimentary effect to your writing style) Your grammar is good, but I think you've confused the word 'waist' with the word 'waste' I really really enjoy your writing style in this. You have some amazing skill going on! The descriptions are of course perfect (I get way too excited when I read something like that and you just make my fingers itch for some paint and paper), I just love all the scenery and the mythology references! The plot in the second chapter felt kind of rushed(but not really?Have difficulty describing what felt off about it.Basically, I felt like it would be more 'story like' and the events would slowly develop), but the scenery and poetic-ness (?) was very well received. Very very glad Ive stumbled upon you. Hope this review isnt too much of an eyesore. :-)"
It's great but just don't get it.
"It truly is a great story and i can understand that people have been split but I just don't understand a few things. Are people under the water or are they land? Where are the probes coming from? It may just be that I'm not seeing your vision like your other stories, so maybe you can help me. Your long term reader, UnknownDigger"
A Dark Prelude
"A very poetic, haunting opening, hopefully the first chapter or prologue to a longer work. There are beautiful lines and metaphors throughout, especially the line, "Or maybe it was a bottle from distant lands, with a love note sprawled [scrawled?] in child's script within." It's a very promising beginning and I love the science fiction implications of race and class that seem to be inscribed in it. Of course, we only get a teasing glimpse here, so I await further developments to see where the author takes this. Great first chapter/opening! Hope to see more."
