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Eggshells I walk around in my mind

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Summary

The 3rd collection of poetry written by Heather Wright that reflects on the inner workings of her mind and the different traumas she's experienced and the way she's coped with the different mental health issues afflicting her generation as a young woman in a modern world.

Status
6mo ago
Chapters
33
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Day The Sky Fell Down

Today was the day that the sky fell down.

When it fell it shook the ground,

I should have cried but instead I smiled.

My body shook,

And my arms faltered,

From the release of pressure that comes only with a special kind of sweet relief.

I basked in sun,

my eyes took on a haze.

I honestly could not tell if the haze was just a healing glaze,

Or maybe just the prelude to a wondrous burn.

I relished the warmth,

And I stood still,

paralyzed.

The seasons changed

And I continued to thaw,

The dam came off its hinges,

and the flood waters rose.

As if right on que,

I flowed with the tide.

And I really couldn't tell you,

the correct reasons why.

I was there for the moment

and then I was gone with the wind.

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