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Fantastic

"I really love the story, kept me hooking till the end."

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Emotional and intriguing

"Loved the premise of this one, and I hope more people review it! I do think there are some conflicting or missing details and that can be confusing, but overall a unique story that certainly pulls at your heartstrings from beginning to end. It works well as a short story, although I would've liked it a little longer just to give me some of those missing details I wanted. Well done, and very interesting!"

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