Enchanted By The Serpent King by Deeviyah at Inkitt
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Enchanted by the Serpent King

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Summary

A dream pulls Ruby into a realm of impossible beauty, where a powerful serpent king watches over a mystical jungle. But as fear turns to fascination, she begins to wonder, was it just a dream or a call to something more?

Status
Complete
Chapters
15
Rating
4.5 2 reviews
Age Rating
16+

The Serpent's Gaze

Ruby's day was as ordinary as ever, coffee mugs clinking in the office pantry, the rhythmic hum of keyboards, and occasional bursts of laughter from her coworkers. She sighed, stealing a glance at the clock, counting down the hours. It wasn't that she hated her job, but something always felt...missing.

By the time she reached home, exhaustion clung to her. A quick shower, a simple dinner, and she collapsed onto her bed. As sleep wrapped around her, she had no idea she was about to step into a world beyond imagination.



When she opened her eyes, she was no longer in her bedroom. Instead, she stood at the edge of a jungle that looked like something out of a dream. The towering trees shimmered with hues beyond the realm of possibility, their iridescent leaves catching the soft glow of an unseen light. The air was thick with the scent of exotic flowers, and the distant murmur of a stream added to the surrealness of it all.

But it wasn't just the world around her that had changed, she had too. Gone was her usual office attire. Instead, she was draped in a soft, flowy silk gown in the most delicate shade of baby pink. The fabric clung gently to her form, rippling like liquid moonlight with every breath of wind. Tiny, sparkling charms dusted the hem, catching the light in a way that made her look almost otherworldly. She lifted her hands, fingers grazing the ethereal material, her doe eyes wide with wonder.

She had never owned a dress like this, never seen a place like this. And yet... she belonged.

Curiosity pulled her forward, her bare feet sinking into the soft earth as she stepped deeper into the unknown. Every breath carried the scent of something ancient and untamed, the surreal beauty of the jungle weaving around her like a spell. But then, she felt it. A slow, creeping sensation that coiled around her spine.

She was being watched. Her breath hitched, her heartbeat hammering against her ribs. And then she saw it.

A colossal snake, unlike anything her mind could have ever conjured, emerged from the dense foliage. Its body, impossibly vast, coiled effortlessly around the towering trees, its size beyond comprehension. The massive creature seemed to blend into the jungle itself, its scales an ethereal mix of greenish gold and deep turquoise, shifting like molten metal under the dim light. Every ridge of its body glinted like thousands of embedded jewels, each shimmer adding to its terrifying majesty.

It wasn't just a creature, it was an entity. A ruler. The undisputed sovereign of this realm.

Ruby's legs refused to move. She stood frozen, her wide doe eyes locked onto the serpent's hypnotic gaze. It was watching her, its golden eyes burning with an intelligence that sent chills down her spine. The air felt heavier, charged with an energy that demanded submission.

The snake was terrifying, but it was beautiful.

It owned this jungle, every inch of it bending to its presence. And in that moment, Ruby realized she was nothing more than an intruder in its kingdom. And then, as if whispered into her mind, a name surfaced.



Marcus.

Before she could even react, Marcus moved. Not with aggression, but with something far more unsettling, purpose. His massive body curled around her, shifting the very earth beneath them. And then, in one fluid motion, he lifted her.

A gasp escaped her lips.

She wanted to struggle, to scream, but no sound came. She felt weightless, held firmly yet effortlessly by his coils. And before she could even process what was happening, the jungle around them blurred. The trees, the glowing leaves, the thick air, it all melted into motion as Marcus carried her somewhere deeper, somewhere hidden.

When they finally stopped, Ruby squeezed her eyes shut, her heart pounding against her ribs. This isn't real. This can't be real. She prayed to any god listening, that this was nothing more than a bizarre, feverish dream.

But then... she opened her eyes. And what she saw stole the breath from her lungs.

Before her stretched an impossible kingdom. A place that shouldn't, couldn't exist. The towering castle before her wasn't made of stone, but gold. Pure, radiant gold, its surface gleaming under an unseen light. The walls shimmered, embedded with diamonds, sapphires, emeralds, jewels so brilliant they looked like stolen stars. The entire kingdom pulsed with an almost divine glow, as if the very air was laced with magic.

Her legs trembled. This can't be real. But it was. As they entered, the jungle creatures, lions, panthers, wolves, even birds perched high above, bowed. Not to her. To Marcus. Her breath hitched. He wasn't just a ruler. He was a King.

Marcus moved again, carrying her past the reverent animals, deeper into the heart of the golden palace. Through towering archways and endless halls, until finally, he brought her to a chamber so vast, so magnificent, it looked like something plucked straight from the pages of a novel.

The room was majestic. Enormous. The kind of place only emperors and gods would dare to rest in. The ceilings stretched endlessly, glittering with crystal chandeliers, their glow casting a soft, golden hue. The bed, if it could even be called that, was so grand, so impossibly huge, it made her feel like an ant standing before a mountain.

Slowly, carefully, Marcus lowered her onto the plush bed, as if handling something fragile. Her body was trembling. She squeezed her fingers into the fabric beneath her, trying to ground herself. When she finally gathered enough courage to lift her head and take in her surroundings...

Her wide doe eyes darted across the impossible beauty of the room, scanning every inch, her breath shaky, her body shivered. Because deep down, she knew. This wasn't a dream. This was real.

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