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Alpha’s Claim

"One of my favourite reads. Loved this book so much & just love Skoll. Love when they come together and my favourite line is “Bleed for me Bambi” so good 🩷"

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Want to escape reality....

"Then read this! When I need a distraction I read a book but when I want adventure I admittedly find an Athena Starr book. I'm glad for Kane but it seems it's gonna be a while before he can come back, sort of. Anyways I loved this book because it allowed me to escape for a bit from life. Great read, please read!"

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Alpha's Claim

"Epic!!!!! Loved this story❤️"

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Dark and adventurous

"A perfect combination of adventurous and sexy. I really loved the storyline, original and unconventional. The suspense is terrific, the continuous sexual undertone is perfectly balanced to keep the reader anticipating and on toes. Great characters. Loved Cyrus involvement from another story. This way it was even more familiar 😉 really love your world of non- humans. Thank you 💋"

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Love it

"The story line very clear for me to catch up whole story, love the explicit scene too."

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Addictive

"I actually can’t wait to read everything else I’m hooked!"

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Alpha's claim

"Amazing story. I was hooked from the first chapter. The only little problem I read was.. There's a spoiler near the end regarding Viola's story. Was that intentional?.. Looking forward to reading the second book. Really great writing, keep up the great work 😍🥰😍"

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Intense read so far

"So far it's dark and brutal!! The world-building is phenomenal, magic, political intrigue and of course romance!!!"

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Alphas claim

"Love the book, everything was wonderful. Could see it as a movie in my mind! Only thing I would say is the story was a bit rushed and were a few holes, not really getting some areas because of this but I couldn't put the book down. "

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Wonderful book to read

"The storyline had us hooked. I loved where every chapter would end, just keeping the right amount of suspense that would have us coming back. I have enjoyed the characters, but the ending was fantastic. It wasn't unrealistic, but hopeful. Thank you for such a beautiful creation."

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Quite a draft.

"Looking forward to book 2. Intensely thrilling. ❤️"

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Loving it!

"Great, everything: plot, style, grammar. I haven't been able to put it down."

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Alpha's claim

"I really enjoyed this book. It has the right balance between mystery, suspense and fighting. Loved it. Well done to the author. This will make a great movie. "

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Wonderful read

"I really enjoyed this book. It follows well, doesn't lag and the storyline is engaging. Sometimes I felt like I was missing something, like what her mother did that was so wrong or what was going on with her friends, but I haven't read her other books, so maybe that information was in those stories. Either way it was definitely worth the time to read. Thank you."

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Really good

"Thoroughly enjoyed this well crafted book."

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How is this free!?

"I’m shocked, but oh so grateful this book is free to read on here. 😅 This book has me literally pacing the room on edge. I love a good dark romance, but was not prepared for this female lead! So exciting, and refreshing. I have missed that feeling I got when I would be so excited and attached to the characters of a good book, so much so that even while I’m doing something else thought out my day I’m still thinking about this book. So to the author thank you so much! You have a real gift. I haven’t finished this book yet, but couldn’t help not to go ahead and review. ❤️"

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Love this

"This guy scarcely good to book so far. Can’t wait for more."

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Greeting

"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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Kaylee’s wild ride

"This story had me hiding behind my hands 🤣. It had everything. Heat, electricity, emotional, scary, family drama, ugly monsters like spiders…I hate spiders 🕷️. Thanks for the wild ride!!!"

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A dark romance with dark magic

"From the abstract and title I was expecting a werewolf/lycan story. It was not clear that the female lead is a witch and the plot lines incorporate significant amounts of dark magic. Athena Star is a good author who rights well. The drama in the relationship between the main characters is well built. But the magic was a bit much for me. I have a strong personal preference to avoid stories containing elements of necromancing, so I put this book down part way through. "

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