Inkitt
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Loved the story

"Loved the characters and the storyline. Beautiful writing technique and wonderfully eloquent vocabulary. Thank you Reason for three stars is some repeated paragraphs and confusing tenses in places. Would love to read a follow on if you decided to write it, you’re writing really is beautiful."

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Hate/love

"Beautiful story. We never know how or when love starts. 2 families brought together in love. A person who was thought to be the enemy ended up being the love of her life her stubbornness to make sure he had the life he. Wanted but in the end their love was reaffirmed "

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Hate / Love

"A beautiful story well written. So realistic and believable, given their reactions and they were in their late teens. Would love to have epilogue where they have juggled their studies / careers / raised family and lived happily ever after."

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