What is your opinion?
Interesting!
"At first, I thought this was going to be a weird vampire and alien story and it wouldn't make any sense. But, reading it I found out that it is actually very good. The characters are well developed and their dialogue was really good. The plot is also well made. Besides a few grammatical mistakes here and there the story is very well written. Hats off to you! Great job!"
Great fun!
"This book was so much fun to read. The combination of Vampires and Aliens isn't something you see everyday and this novel does the pairing justice. The characters in this story really pop with many memorable moments and quotes!"
Good beginning
"I just read the first chapter and thought I'd review it now. I enjoyed the beginning of this story very much. You build tangible characters that seem to have depth, and you create an atmosphere of mystery and tension from the beginning. You don't give the reader very much along the lines of plot, and some of the things confused me, but perhaps that is illuminated in the next few chapters. I have to say, I didn't really like the first section of this chapter. I feel like you were trying to create intrigue but it just ended up being too vague. I think that you could improve it by adding more detail, such as who/what is speaking, where are they when they are speaking, why do they speak the way they do (I thought maybe they might be computers the way it was put together)? No biggee, just a thought because the opening sentences are the most important. I enjoyed the characters in this story quite a lot, and their dialogue and interactions felt very natural. I want to know more about them, so you've done your job. Great beginning! I hope that you do well in the contest. :-)"
