Kaitlyn Bier

Great start!

I've only read the first three chapters, but what I have read has me hooked! What I like the most about it how the boys all come from completely different places, but still manage to come together. I also really like the symbolic-ness put behind the animals in the story. This plot reminds me of a video game RPG where you always want to know what's going to happen next. Aside from very few grammatical errors this is an amazing story and I think it can go really far!

Great so far!

This story is great so far! The title intrigued me enough to click the link, but your exceptional descriptions of the scenes and the interactions between the grandmother and granddaughter are kept me reading! Your use of cliffhangers are also really good! I can't wait for the rest!

Awesome!

It's only chapter one and I was already on the edge of my seat! The author does an amazing job at painting a picture for you. You can really sense and feel what Robert is feeling, and it's great. Hats off to you!

Interesting!

At first, I thought this was going to be a weird vampire and alien story and it wouldn't make any sense. But, reading it I found out that it is actually very good. The characters are well developed and their dialogue was really good. The plot is also well made. Besides a few grammatical mistakes here and there the story is very well written. Hats off to you! Great job!

Great!

It's a great story and a good concept. I haven't seen much Hetalia fanfiction so I was immediately delighted with that Also, I like the idea you're going with the crossover. I also love the way you use those cliffhangers :P Keep up the good work!

Pretty good, so far!

The idea sounds really interesting, The first chapter is short, but it grabs your attention long enough to wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter. A couple slight grammatical errors, but overall It's great so far. Keep up the good work!