Inkitt
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Captivating read

"First chapter read and I'm already hooked! The author has set the scene well and the characters have been well developed. I noticed a couple of misspellings but nothing too serious. I hope that the author continues with the story as I really enjoyed it."

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"Hey, this is a really great story. It's an interesting spin on your average fairy tale, and I'm intrigued to see where it goes. I'm a little puzzled why Suri is treated like dirt, but hopefully you'll explain that somewhere along the line. I understand that she was born from a terrible thing, but why didn't they just send her away altogether? Was it a mother's love? I'm just thinking to myself here, but anyway, the rest of the characters are interesting so far and I look forward to their development."

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