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The Valley Of Slaves

"Wow that ending really surprised me! I was thinking the girl would have survived but it turned out she didn't! I felt so bad for NiNa and Helmuth what they went through together trying to survive the world together RR showing his emotions at the end when he lost the girl that he probably did love I was shocked with the ending please write more "

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Gripping, mysterious and so worth the read!

"This read had me hooked from the start. The plot was really well developed and had many perspectives. It flowed really nicely, and (assuming there's more books to come) left the ending a bit open, leaving you wanting more! 100% would recommend you give this a go! "

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The Valley Of Slaves

"A well written and edited story that was fairly slow to start and a bit confusing but once it really got going it was quite gripping. I think they got away but the ending is a bit fuzzy; I’m presuming that is deliberate as it works but I really can’t say for sure lol. A very dark story but definitely worth reading. "

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