Inkitt
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"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on dis luansousa8287 instagram: eloi.se78319 "

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Fun

"Fun little quick read"

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Dog Falls

"I enjoyed reading this book. I’m hoping there is a book 2"

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Dog Falls

"I wanted more "

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Good book

"I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing "

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Great this far

"I like the different narrative compared to the usual story that is just recycled by most of the authors. The story is compelling and doesn't take the first 60 chapters to get to the point."

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