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Enchating

"This story flows so beautifully with such elegant words and characters yet a dark plot behind it all. I really enjoyed this. The mix of the dark and the light reminds me of Mary Shelley's writing style. The addition of french made this story feel so much more real and like a love story. There were a couple of punctuation errors but that can be easily fixed. Overall, it was astounding and I can't wait to read more,"

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Review: A Funny Thing...

"Great story: the characters are beautifully thought out and I can't get over how much I adore Thierry and his quirks. I like your take on the vampire genre and find your visual descriptions engrossing. The last chapter I read seemed to be moving a bit quickly though. It might just be me but I feel an obsession brewing between these two instead of true affection - but, as I said, just me. I hope to read more of this soon!"

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