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It's just another morning when I spend precious time delicately drowning my eyes in the deep black of my make-up. A thick line of pencil under my eyes, a thick line of ...
This story contains themes of: assault, depression, suicide, violent death
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Katnyss is 17 years old. She was perfectly happy, her relationship with her older brother was fused, she had a perfect boyfriend with whom she had been in love for two years, when a tragedy shattered her happiness into a thousand pieces. She withdrew into herself, lost her friends, distanced herself from her brother and, devastated, tried to end her life. Saved in extremis by a mysterious young man, she learns to live and love again, even if her path is strewn with pitfalls. She will overcome her trials, surrounded by her family, her new friends and above all her brother, Tom. __________________________________ My dear English-speaking readers, I'm a French author and I'm not bilingual. In order to share my novel with you, I've used DeepL. I hope the translation is good enough for you to enjoy the story to the full! Please let me know if you have any suggestions for improving comprehension. Thank you for your indulgence and happy reading.
It's just another morning when I spend precious time delicately drowning my eyes in the deep black of my make-up. A thick line of pencil under my eyes, a thick line of ...

Here you'll find "my whole universe" in English. Versions translated from French, thank you for your indulgence ๐๏ปฟ

Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! ๐๐๐พ๐๐พ
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Charmaine: THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT IM GONNA READ IT LATER BC IM TIRED BC I JUST FINISHED WRITING 10 CHAPTERS IN 1 DAY!
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Farial-Jap-Girl: ใชใใฆ็ด ๆตใงใไบๆณใใใชใใฃใ่ชญๆธไฝ้จใชใใงใใใ! ใใใฏ้้ใใชใใใใใใใใชๆๆๅฐ่ชฌใงใฏใใใพใใใใใใใใใใใใชใใใจใซๆ่ฌใใใใใใใงใใ็ปๅ ดไบบ็ฉใใกใใจใฆใใชใขใซใซๆใใใใใใงใใๆฌ ็นใใใฃใฆใ่ค้ใงใๆ ็ฑ็ใงใไบบ้ใใใใ็ฝใ้ปใใงใฏๅฒใๅใใชใใ้ญ ๅ็ใชใฐใฌใผใฎ้จๅใซๆบใกใฆใใพใใๆใใๆฏ้ ใๆใใใใฆๆใใฎ่ตคใ้งใซ้ฃฒใฟ่พผใพใใใใซใชใฃใใจใใซใๅฅใฎ้ใ้ธใถๅฏ่ฝๆงใๆใใฆใใใจใใใใใจใฆใๅฅฝใใงใใใใงใๆญฃ็ดใไธ็ชใฎ้ฉใใฏใใใฎๆฌใใจใซใใๆฅฝใใ่ชญใใใใจ! ไฝ่ ใฏใใญใคใณใฎๅฃฐใ่ฆไบใซๆใๅบใใฆใใฆใ็งใฏใใฃใใๅฅใฎๆไปฃใๅฅใฎๅ ดๆใธ้ฃใๅปใใใใใใชๆฐๅใซใชใใพใใ...
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jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...
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mutondimaluleke: Amazing story, loved every bit of it. I definitely recommend
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Biva: Quite good for a novella. Impressive writing style and we'll edited. Just one thing- Karla keeps referring herself to a stray cat and while at first it makes sense the analogy gets stale after a while.
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