A Promise Made
(1221 BC Earth Time)
The caravan moved out in surprisingly organized chaos. Dust filled the air, along with the bellowing of the oxen an...
This story contains themes of: extreme violence gore, violent death
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In 1211 B.C.E. a child is born with the ability to live forever. He wonders why he has the gift of immortality as he lives through war, battles and the death of loved ones. He flees from the Assyrian army south toward the Sea Above Akkad at the confluence of the Tigris and Euphrates rivers. Pursued by Assyrian and Babylonian armies he gathers a disparate group of freedom loving people to take on an unprecedented quest for liberty. A debate rages on the opposite end of the universe as alien creators of biological intelligence compete to determine the best process for conscience to develop. However an aberration of particle wave disruption is found upending the creators potential creative process. A battle between two groups of physicists ensures jeopardizing the future of humanity.
(1221 BC Earth Time)
The caravan moved out in surprisingly organized chaos. Dust filled the air, along with the bellowing of the oxen an...
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ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.
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Libre: I like the book. I read it last but prefer it to all the others.
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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Gallandro7: I originally added this because it looked interesting and I was curious how the mate process would go. I almost removed it due to several other books ahead of it, but I took an afternoon and read the entire thing in one go.I was pleasantly surprised at how well the book was crafted and that the mate...
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Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.
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Karen Nagy: This is a wonderful story with warm, endearing characters. It shows growth and acceptance of individual differences combined to make a strong unit. Loved the characters and enjoyed the writing style. Can't wait to read more!
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Karen Nagy: The story of an intelligent woman and a strong wolf. Combining powers of the mind and body to the benefit of their pack. Love and respect are proven to be valuable commodities. Looking forward to reading more, well done.
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ChiChi_Smiles: This is a very interesting Story ☺️there was no dull moment from the beginning to the end 💯 Good story line,Good Writing ❤️❤️❤️
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