A Love Undone by Miss Aicy at Inkitt
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A Love Undone

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Summary

Lezah and Evon, deeply in love, find their world shattered when Evon falls for Anya, a girl who embodies everything new and exciting. Evon's betrayal leaves Lezah heartbroken, and she seeks solace in another's arms. When Evon realizes the depth of his mistake and tries to win Lezah back, she can't forgive him. She's found a new path, and while she still holds a deep love for Evon, it's a love that's been forever undone.

Status
Complete
Chapters
20
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

*Evon P.O.V.*

The sun bled orange and crimson across the horizon, painting the sky in hues I usually associated with Lezah – fiery, passionate, beautiful.  But tonight, the beauty felt like a cruel mockery.  I stood behind her, my lips brushing her temple, the gesture feeling as hollow as the promise I was about to break.


Two months. That’s all it took. Two months with Anya, and the years I spent with Lezah felt… faded.  Like an old photograph, the colors muted, the edges blurred.  It wasn't a sudden, dramatic shift.  It was a slow, insidious creep, a gradual erosion of feeling I hadn't even noticed until it was too late.


Lezah’s long hair, usually a cascade of vibrant auburn, felt heavy tonight, a burden I no longer wished to carry.  Her scent, once intoxicating, now felt… ordinary.  The way she laughed, once music to my ears, now grated on my nerves.  I caught myself thinking about Anya’s laugh, lighter, brighter, more… exciting.


It wasn't that Anya was inherently better.  It was that she was different.  She represented something new, something fresh, a thrilling escape from the comfortable monotony of my life with Lezah.  With Lezah, everything was familiar, predictable.  With Anya, there was a constant spark, a sense of adventure, a feeling of being alive in a way I hadn't felt in years.  The comfort had become suffocating.  The familiar, boring.


It wasn't that I didn't love Lezah anymore.  Or at least, I thought I didn't.  The truth was more complicated, more insidious.  It was a slow, agonizing process of falling out of love, a gradual dimming of the flame, until only embers remained.  And those embers, I realized, were easily snuffed out by the brighter blaze of a new infatuation.


The kiss on her temple felt like a betrayal, a final, silent goodbye to the woman who had once been my world.  I pulled away, the sunset mirroring the turmoil within me.  The vibrant colors felt like a cruel joke, highlighting the emptiness I felt.  I knew what I had to do, even though the thought of it sent a cold dread through me.  I had to tell her.  I had to break her heart.  And as I turned to face her, I knew there would be no turning back.


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