The Cosmic Keeper by A Ninja at Inkitt
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The cosmic keeper

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Summary

This story is about a guy named Reynold that discovers so many new things that 99% of people on earth don't know and would just fantasize about their existence, he goes on so many adventures learning so many new things, meets up with so many people and he gets the most important role in all the COSMOS. One that is most respected, but then he gets to know and deal with Other places and people that would pose to him............

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1 : The Change

1 : Reynold : uhhhh, how boring! 

2 : Jason : yeah, you’re right.

3 : Reynold : working in a super market is tiring sometimes. So when does the brake finishes again?

4 : Jason : like after 3 minutes or so.

5 : Reynold : ok.

6 : Author talking : Reynold sees an old caped man at the cashier so he rushes to him and says :” Hi sir, how can i help u? ” The old caped man leaves 2 notes on the cashier and then vanishes while Reynold was looking at it, Reynold looks up just to see that the old man has vanished out of his sight.

7 : Reynold’s thoughts : Where did he go?! What are these notes? One of them say be aware of whom you think they are your friends,......ok, i will read the other one, the second one says : say Cosmo 12 times and he will guide you how to use the map. Map? What map? I think this is just one cheap prank, to think that someone would believe this..... hahahaha......... But........ maybe i will try it during my break of 40 minutes?

8 : Jason : You look confused and creeped out by something, is every thing okay?

9 : Reynold : uh, yeah everything is fine.

10 : Jason : the brake has started if you want to go, if not, then i’ll ask the manager to get extra time for me since you’re here! hahaha!

11 : Reynold : No need for that i’m going home for the brake.

12 : Jason : oh, ok then, see ya!

13 : Author talking : Reynold goes back to his appartement wanting to test the second note, but deep down he feels like he is being stupid. Meanwhile Jason : something is off...........wait..... did he receive the notes!!??

14 : Author talking : Meanwhile in Reynold’s appartement :

15 : Reynold : ok, so let’s test this out! Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo, Cosmo!............ Of course nothing happened! I’m such an idiot for believing this!!

16 : Cosmo : you’re not, in fact you’re very intelligent, and that is why you have been chosen.

17 : Author talking : Reynold hears a strange voice then turns around and sees a tall man suited in blue, white and black, and something weird behinds him..... that looks like a.......“PORTAL!?!?! Who are you!?”

18 : Cosmo : you called me 12 times and now you’re horrified that i actually showed up?

19 : Reynold : i thought this was just a prank by someone!! So what do you want? My soul? Because i promise you it is not tasty AT ALL!!!

20 : Cosmo : hahahahahahaha, no, i don’t want your soul, but i want to guide you on the road of greatness! Follow me!

21 : Reynold : Into where? That weird portal? Because i’m not coming!

22 : Cosmo : Come on Reynold, i know you always wanted more than just working in that old super market, come with me, this is a great chance to.....change.

23 : Author talking : Cosmo convinces Reynold and then they enter into the portal.

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