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Wonderful

"I really liked this story. I found in it the Discworld spirit and I was very happy to read about the Horde. The Writer, of course, was awesome. I can agree with Death; he will live a long, really long time. Thank you for this story."

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All my likes

"Okay, I'm a die-hard Pratchett fan (I'm intending to cosplay him at an upcoming convention) and that was all kinds of awesome. I own (of course) The Last Hero, and I reckon you got the personalities of the characters just right. And of course, adding in 'the writer' without ever naming him was very good indeed. So yes, that story gave me a very warm feeling inside. You did a good job at covering his writing style as well; I could see, hear and feel the story as it unfolded. In short, kudos. You just made my day."

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Rowan Catara

"Dominic, I loved this submission. If you were nervous about putting it into the public domain, I'd say you have nowt to worry about. The vivacious descriptions, the humour and the tribute to Terry Pratchett were, in my mind, unmatched. I think you picked his storywriting mode, his character and his vocabulary (not that I ever met him) down pat. I think you should be very proud of this."

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A fitting tribute

"I'm ashamed to admit i was nervous when this popped up on facebook. Sir Terry Pratchett has been my favourite author since i was 10 years old and has played a huge part in moulding me into the person i am today. The thought that someone, however devoted or well meaning, may corrupt his work was heartbreaking to imagine. However Dominic has captured the spirit of STP and written a truly moving and entertaining piece of fiction which i can almost believe is real. It has brought a tear to my eye but once again a smile as well. Well done and i hope to read more of your work in the future."

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