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Romantic

"A very enjoyable read."

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Passionate and raw love story

"Beautifully written, raw and passionate. The only part I wish it had was her reciprocating saying that she loved him too. Other than that, beautifully written and with great dialogue and suspense. Loved reading this story! Thank you for sharing it with us. Looking forward to reading your other books 😍❤"

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Wowww woww woowwww

"Ok. So I loooveeeee it so much!!! I love the drama!!! The sweetness!!!! The unstopping confessions!!! That seriously healed my inner child. But as an avid reader, I would not just say this is perfect because it’s not. Clearly I give 5 stars because I’m so satisfied with what I read. But it doesn’t mean you have nothing to improve. You have a lot!! You need to polish your writing. Make it sound more like native English because I can detect some expressions are just far from what we use here. Also, some flows are too rushed or not perfectly plotted. There’s definitely many editing you need to do. But for a quick read, this is totally lovely!!!"

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Well written

"Beautiful work! Well written piece! I Loved this book!! Hats off to you dear author!!!"

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