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Loved it

"Even the chaos...so happy for Mel and Archer "

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Love it

"Such a lovely short story to read no big drama. Love it"

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Parfait

"Une histoire vraiment sympathique à lire, bravo"

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They can’t help wanting each other !

"I’m really enjoying this book. Well- written story and characters who deserve happiness!"

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lzt

"really enjoy your books"

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Crossing the line

"Loved it, a spicy short story of finding love despite the obstacles. Great characters you will fall in love with ♥️🔥🔥"

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Crossing the line

"Lovely story 🩷"

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Good reading

"Good reading. Very predictable but still good. Good writing skills from author. Will recommend this book."

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Crossing the Line

"This was another intense and steamy one, with many tropes I love: age gap, a man who begins as more dominating but has a vulnerable side and lets her see it because he realises he's falling for her. And then feelings and tenderness that is expressed through actions and words. 🥰"

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Its so good

"It’s so hard to find a good book that’s easy to read and this one is one of the best I’ve read. Easy to focus and the words don’t muddle together. Your grammar is excellent and they way you describe feelings and sensations makes you feel like part of the book. Like you’re watching everything unfold. 1000/10 will definitely read again."

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🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

"Well developed characters, great plot line and dialogue, and the steaminess is exceptional. "

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Loved the tension, the spice, the romance

"The thrill of the forbidden… Loved this short read! ❤️🔥❤️"

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So sweet!!!

"Simply amazing!!"

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Amazing book

"Loved the book 📖 it was a new and exciting read for me ❤️"

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Great story❤️

"I loved everything about this story. Archer and Melody and the slow burn romance and spice was hottt🥵 the age gap made it even hotter for me. Beautiful story again by Raven❤️ Totally recommend❤️‍🔥🥵🪭🪭"

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Crossing the line

"Beautiful story! Loved everything about it ❤️"

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Crossing The Line

"What a beautiful hot story! The sexual tension was so hot and as always really well written. You really do have a Midas touch! 👏👏"

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Crossing the line

"The plot is cliche’ but it was beautifully written! Thank you for sharing! 💕💕💕"

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Crossing the Line

"Loved it. I don't see the whole age gap problem. None of them are children, they are adults. That's the problem though, no one knows how to mind their own business. Great writing. Keep it up. Looking forward to reading more of your work. "

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Crossing the line

"Truly loved this story. Very well written and engaging.i loved the characters. Just shows love will always find a way to you when you least expect it."

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