BEHIND EACH STROKE

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Summary

Behind Each Stroke In a quiet town shrouded by secrets, a string of bizarre murders begins to unravel the sanity of those left behind. No signs of struggle. No forced entry. Only bodies—lifeless, eyes and toenails missing—left behind in silence. Detective Lina Marlow, haunted by her own past, is drawn into a web of horror where nothing is as it seems. And somewhere, behind the canvas of beauty and color, something sinister is watching… waiting.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

CHAPTER ONE: LINA

The smell of coffee and burnt toast clung to the kitchen like an old memory.

Detective Lina Marlow moved with the precision of someone used to waking up before the sun. She wore a simple black turtleneck tucked into dark jeans, her badge clipped discreetly to her belt. Her eyes—sharp, calculating, and tired—were fixed on the small toaster that had chosen this morning, of all mornings, to act up again.

She stabbed at the lever. Nothing.

Of course.

"Mom, you look like you're going to arrest the toaster."

Vanessa's voice rang in from the hallway, light and teasing.

Lina turned, the corners of her mouth twitching into something that might have been a smile on someone else. On her, it was more of a brief ceasefire with gravity.

"Don't tempt me. I've locked up worse."

Vanessa strutted into the kitchen in her usual messy brilliance—a paint-stained denim jacket over a faded Nirvana tee, her curly hair pulled into a wild bun that threatened to collapse any second. She was balancing a sketchpad, her phone, and an overstuffed pencil case that looked like it had seen a war zone.

Lina glanced at the pad and sighed.

"You're not taking that whole kit to school again, are you?"

Vanessa didn't answer right away. She dropped her supplies onto the kitchen table with a loud thunk and proceeded to shovel dry cereal into her mouth with the grace of a raccoon in a trash can.

"Vanessa."

"Mmf?" she replied, mouth full.

"You promised. One sketchpad. Not an entire art store."

"It's not the whole store. Just... a small section of aisle three." She grinned, wiping her mouth. "And maybe some aisle four."

Lina narrowed her eyes. "You know if anything gets stolen, I'll be the one they call."

"You always say that."

"Because it's always true.

Vanessa shrugged and grabbed her backpack. It sagged with the weight of God-knows-what.

“Mom. Relax. I'm not smuggling uranium. Just brushes and charcoal."

Lina downed the rest of her coffee in one gulp. It was cold.

"Get in the car."

They pulled out of the driveway fifteen minutes later, Vanessa humming along to a playlist she'd created that Lina could only describe as aggressively teenage. The car was quiet for a moment, save for the low rumble of the engine and the occasional hum of tires on wet asphalt. The rain had stopped, but the sky was still a dull gray, like the day hadn't decided what it wanted to be yet.

Vanessa broke the silence. "So... big case?"

Lina glanced at her daughter. "When is it not?"

"I saw the news. Third guy in a month. Creepy stuff."

"You watch the news now?"

"Only when murder's involved."

"Great. That's what every mother wants to hear."

Vanessa smirked. "You don't get to judge. You're literally a homicide detective."

Lina sighed. "That doesn't mean I want you obsessing over corpses."

"I'm not obsessing. I'm... intrigued."

"Same thing."

They paused at a red light. Lina drummed her fingers on the steering wheel, her eyes flicking to her daughter again. Vanessa was staring out the window now, absentmindedly sketching with her finger on the fogged glass.

"You ever think about painting something less... intense?" Lina asked.

Vanessa turned, raising an eyebrow. "Like flowers?"

"Yeah. Or sunsets. Something that doesn't look like it might crawl off the wall and eat someone."

Vanessa snorted. "You're the one dealing with real-life monsters. I just paint the ones in my head."

The light turned green. Lina didn't respond right away.

In truth, she admired her daughter's art—even when it disturbed her. Vanessa had a gift, no doubt. But there was something about it. A rawness. Like she could see something others couldn't.

Sometimes, Lina wondered if that came from her—if pain could pass through blood like eye color or height.

She pushed the thought away.


"You still thinking about that art scholarship?" she asked instead.


"Maybe." Vanessa shrugged. "I don't know if I'm good enough."


"You are," Lina said firmly.


"You have to say that."


"No, I don't. And I wouldn't if it weren't true."


Another quiet moment passed between them.


Vanessa shifted in her seat. "Do you think Dad would've liked my art?"


Lina's hands tightened slightly on the wheel.


She didn't answer right away.


"I don't know," she said finally. "But I think he would've loved you."


Vanessa nodded, her face unreadable.


They pulled up to the curb in front of Oakview High. Kids were already swarming toward the doors like ants toward a dropped lollipop.


Vanessa turned to face her mother, hand on the door.


"You gonna be late again tonight?"


"Probably."


"Try not to catch a serial killer before dinner, okay?"


"I make no promises."


Vanessa grinned and hopped out, slinging her overloaded backpack over one shoulder. She started walking, then turned back and said, "Love you, Mom."


Lina watched her for a moment, heart tight.


"Love you too, Vee."


As her daughter disappeared into the crowd, Lina pulled back into traffic and let out a long, tired breath.


There was a body waiting for her downtown.


By the time Lina arrived at the scene, the early morning drizzle had turned to mist, giving the suburban neighborhood an eerie hush. The street was blocked off with yellow tape, the usual crowd of curious neighbors gathering at a polite distance, whispering with morbid fascination.


The house itself was modest—two stories, clean brickwork, perfectly trimmed hedges. A blue recycling bin sat tipped on its side in the driveway, contents spilling out like entrails. It was the only sign of disorder in an otherwise picture-perfect exterior.


Lina parked, clipped her badge on, and ducked under the tape. Officer Keegan stood near the front steps, arms crossed, nodding as she approached.


"Morning," he said. "Well, sort of."


"Still counts," she replied. "You beat me here."


"Didn't sleep much. These scenes are starting to get under my skin."


"Same setup?"


Keegan nodded grimly. "No signs of forced entry. No struggle. Place locked from the inside. Neighbor called it in—was supposed to meet the guy for coffee. Found him like that. Door was unlocked when she arrived."


"Witness statement?"


"Already taken. She's a wreck."


They stepped into the house. The smell hit Lina immediately—not rot, not yet, but the metallic tang of blood and something harder to name. Something stale. Cold.


Inside, the forensics team was already at work. Bright lights, snapping cameras, blue gloves rustling like wind in plastic trees.


The body was on the couch. Male. Around forty. He looked like he'd simply stopped existing mid-sentence. One hand rested palm-up on his knee, the other curled loosely near his side. His eyes were gone. So were his toenails.


"Jesus," Lina muttered under her breath.


"Yeah," Keegan said quietly. "Same as the others."


They moved toward the couch, careful not to disturb the scene. The head of forensics, Dr. Camille Ortega, looked up from her crouch beside the body. Mid-40s, no-nonsense, ponytail wound so tight it looked like it hurt. She stood as Lina approached, pulling off one glove with a practiced snap.


"Detective Marlow," she said. "You're not going to like this one either."


"Lay it on me."


"Victim's name is Henry Stroud. Forty-one. Lived alone. No signs of forced entry, no external wounds, no defensive injuries. Cause of death's unclear—no trauma to the brain or heart that we can see. We'll know more after autopsy, but it's looking like the same pattern."


"Missing eyes and toenails," Lina said quietly.


Ortega nodded. "Same precision as the others. Surgical almost. But we've found no tool marks. It's like... they were removed without resistance. Almost like the body gave them up willingly."


"That's not a thing," Keegan muttered.


"It is now," Ortega said, and moved off to check on her team.


Lina crouched and examined the body herself. Henry's face was peaceful, even serene. Not what you'd expect from someone whose eyes were torn out. The hands showed no sign of struggle. Fingernails intact. Teeth undisturbed. Just the eyes. The toes.


"What's your read?" she asked Keegan.


He rubbed the back of his neck. "Weird thing is, the guy was an accountant. Lived a pretty normal life. Worked from home mostly. No priors. No known enemies. No sign of break-in. Same as the last two. First was that high school student—Jessica Klein, right?"


Lina nodded.


"Then the old man—Walter Briggs. Seventy-two, retired math teacher. Now this guy. No connection we can find. Different ages, different neighborhoods. No shared social circles. Nothing. Just... poof."


"And each one, eyes and toenails," Lina said.


"Like a signature."


She stared at the wall behind the couch. A framed photo of Henry and what looked like his mother at some lakeside cabin. No disturbance. No struggle. Everything untouched.


She turned to Keegan. "Get anything unusual off his computer?"


"Tech's still going through it. But from what we saw, nothing jumped out."


Lina stood up. "Let's get back. I want everyone on this."



HOMICIDE UNIT — DOWNTOWN PRECINCT


The meeting room smelled of old coffee and wiped-down whiteboards. The fluorescents buzzed overhead, and the screen on the far wall blinked with a slideshow of crime scene photos. Three faces stared down at the room in grim silence.


Jessica Klein.

Walter Briggs.

Henry Stroud.


Each photo accompanied by dates, times, and cause of death: Unknown.


Lina sat at the table, flipping through her notepad, while officers filed in and took their places. Keegan slid into the seat beside her. A moment later, the door opened, and in walked Faisal Salem.


Faisal was in his mid-50s, tall and broad-shouldered, with salt-and-pepper hair and deep-set eyes that missed nothing. He wore a tailored gray suit, slightly rumpled from long hours, and a paisley tie that clashed gloriously with the rest of his outfit. His presence commanded the room—not because he raised his voice, but because he never had to.


He was the only Indian in the department, and he carried that truth with a quiet strength, never demanding respect but always earning it. Stories about his time on the force circulated like folklore—how he once talked a suicidal man down from a forty-story ledge while a sniper waited with orders to fire. How he cracked a double homicide in under forty-eight hours with nothing but a fingerprint on a penny.


Now, he stood at the head of the table, remote in hand, and clicked to the next slide.


"Three victims. No connections. No pattern—on the surface." He gestured to the screen. "Jessica Klein. Seventeen. Honor roll student. Found in her bedroom. No signs of forced entry. Same removals."


Click.


"Walter Briggs. Seventy-two. Retired, lived alone. Found by his neighbor. No signs of trauma. Same removals."


Click.


"Henry Stroud. Forty-one. Accountant. Found this morning."


He turned to face the room. "All of them found in secured locations. Doors locked. No DNA. No fibers. Nothing stolen. Nothing touched."


Lina spoke. "Each one found with the same missing body parts. Eyes and toenails."


Faisal nodded. "Forensics confirms there's no consistent tool use. No poisons. Nothing chemical. Camille Ortega says the tissue shows signs of... willing detachment. As if they were never part of the body to begin with."


A silence fell across the room.


"That doesn't make sense," someone muttered.


"No," Faisal said. "It doesn't. But sense isn't our job. Solving this is."


Lina leaned forward. "I want full backgrounds on all three victims. Every inch of their lives. Who they spoke to, where they went. Any public places they shared. Schools, hospitals, galleries, clubs—dig deep. One of them has to lead us to the next."


Faisal clicked off the screen. "This doesn't feel random anymore. It feels like we're being watched."



LATER THAT EVENING — LINA'S OFFICE


The precinct had thinned out. Phones stopped ringing. Desks sat empty, cluttered with files and forgotten coffee cups.


Lina stood in her office, exhausted. She stared at her reflection in the dark window for a long moment, then started gathering her things. Jacket. Notepad. Keys.


She moved to turn off her lamp—and paused.


A flash.


Her mind jolted, a bolt of cold recognition that made her breath catch. She staggered back a step, eyes wide, heart hammering. One of the photos from the meeting. One of the victim's living rooms. Something—


Something she hadn't seen before.


It wasn't the body. It wasn't the furniture.


It was on the wall. Behind them.


A shape. A color. A shadow. Her memory scrambled to retrieve it, but the image slipped from her like water through fingers.


She closed her eyes and breathed in, steadying herself.


Then she grabbed her phone and dialed.


"Keegan? I need that photo. The one from Jessica Klein's bedroom. The wide shot. Send it to me."


There was a long pause on the other end.


"Everything okay?"


Lina didn't answer. Not right away.


"Just... send it."


She ended the call and stood still, the silence wrapping around her like a noose.


Whatever she'd seen, it wasn't just in Jessica's room.


She had seen it before.

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