L'étrangère Du Lac Noir by miriamesepain at Inkitt
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L'Étrangère du Lac Noir

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Summary

Clara pensait avoir trouvé refuge au bord du Lac Noir. Erreur. Dès la première nuit, des chuchotements déchirent le silence. La poupée en porcelaine posée sur son lit - qu'elle n'a pas mise là. Les yeux quand elle prononce le nom de l'ancienne locataire...Une certaines Clara, disparue en 1987. Quand elle découvre le journal caché sous le plancher, glacée, elle lit: '' La Dame du Lac prends nos visages. Je suis la prochaine." Les pages suivantes sont tachées de sang. Pourtant, Léo, l'étrange voisin, semble savoir des choses. Ses mains froides quand il lui touche l'épaule. Son sourire quand il murmure: '' T'inquiète, pas les Clara... elles finissent toujours par s'adapter.'' Mais la vérité est pire. Le Lac ne rends pas ses mort. Il les clone. Et Clara actuelle vient de comprendre pourquoi toutes les femmes noyées ici... lui ressemblent tant.''

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

La Poupée des Oubliés

Clara avait choisi la maison du Lac Noir pour disparaître. Personne ne viendrait l'y chercher.

Pourtant, dès la première nuit, elle comprit son erreur.

Le grattement contre sa porte n'était pas le vent.

La silhouette aperçue dans le reflet de la fenêtre n'était pas un arbre.

Et cette poupée en porcelaine aux regard vide, posée sur son oreiller...

Elle ne l'avait pas mise là.

Clara tourna la poupée entre ses doigts. Une fissure courait le long de ces joues, comme des larmes figés.

Dans son dos, un chuchotement glissa:

-Tu as pris ma place. Maintenant prends aussi mon visage.

Elle se retourna. La chambre était vide.

Mais dans le miroir, quelques chose cligna des yeux à sa place.

Citation de fin :

'' Les lieux hantés le sont toujours pour les bonnes raisons.

Ce ne sont pas les morts qui errent.

Ce sont les vivants qui n'ont pas su partir. ''

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