Tempted By The Rain Girl by Emmanuellazuma at Inkitt
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Tempted By the Rain Girl

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Summary

When Derrick drives his wife Nia to care for her illing mother in Lawrenceville, he's left alone for the first time in a long while. On the way back to Athens, he spots a striking young woman stranded by the roadside. Against his better judgement, he offers her a ride, unaware that this small act of kindness will upend his entire life.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 3

Chapter Three: A House Too Quiet


The rain hadn’t let up, and neither had Derrick’s unease.


The house greeted them in silence—no TV murmuring in the background, no pot simmering on the stove, no soft rustle of Nia padding across the wooden floors. Just emptiness wrapped in drywall.


He unlocked the door and held it open for Sinndy, who stepped in slowly, her shoes squeaking against the floor. Her earlier warmth on the drive had cooled—now she was quiet, eyes lowered, the echo of water dripping from her clothes marking a slow, uncertain rhythm.


“This way,” Derrick said, voice low, almost reverent in the hush of the space.


She followed him into the living room, arms crossed tightly over her chest, backpack clinging to her shoulder like a frightened pet. The lights were soft, casting long amber shadows across the hardwood, making the room feel smaller than it was.


Derrick looked at her clothes—soaked, clinging like they’d fused with her skin.


He cleared his throat. I need to give her something dry, he thought. But what?


The thought of offering Nia’s clothes floated to the surface, then sank just as quickly. It felt wrong. Like opening a locked box in someone else's absence. Like betrayal draped in cotton.


No. Not her clothes.


He turned instead to the coat rack near the stairs and pulled down his old UGA jersey—oversized, soft, and still holding the faded scent of years gone by. He held it out to her like a peace offering.


“Here. It’s warm. Might be a little big.”


She took it gently, brushing his fingers. Her eyes met his—soft, unreadable. “Thank you.”


“You want some coffee? Or tea?”


“Coffee,” she said, voice just above a whisper.


He nodded and made for the kitchen, his footsteps muffled by the hum of the storm outside. The kettle hissed to life, and as he set out a tray—two mugs, sugar, cream—his mind wandered.


Derrick was a good man. And not once—not even once—had he thought of cheating on his wife. But of course, he was a man. He had a weakness, like Samson, like David. The kind carved deep into the spine of every son of Adam. He was a natural helper, and the feeling that came with helping—real, needed help—was unmatched. Even now, the intention was as pure as chemically filtered water: clean, safe, righteous.


But even pure water can drown you, if you wade too deep.


He walked back slowly, tray in hands. Turned the corner into the living room—and stopped.


The tray hit the floor.


Coffee splashed, porcelain shattered, the moment froze.


Sinndy stood in the soft light, stripped of everything except her bra and underwear. Her skin glowed like polished bronze, droplets still clinging to her collarbone like they didn’t want to let go. The jersey lay folded beside her on the couch, forgotten in the moment between caution and comfort.


Derrick stood frozen. Not a man, not a husband, just a shape full of thunder and disbelief.


She gasped. “Oh my God—I didn’t think you’d be back that fast.”


In one smooth motion, she grabbed the jersey and pulled it over herself. It fell over her like water poured into a too-big glass—swallowed her frame, made her look smaller. Younger. Even more dangerous.


“I’m so sorry,” she said, looking down at the mess on the floor. “Where’s the mop?”


Derrick opened his mouth to answer, but the words stuck to the back of his throat like wet leaves.


She didn’t wait.


She padded barefoot into the kitchen—like she belonged there—and came back with the mop, steam still rising from the floor, a halo of heat where the coffee had landed. She knelt down and began cleaning, her face calm, her movements unbothered.


“I didn’t mean to make things weird,” she said softly. “I was just cold.”


Derrick stared at her as if trying to remember what day it was. What year. Who he was before the storm.


Outside, the rain tapped the windows like a second heartbeat.


Inside, temptation settled into the corners of the room, quiet and watching.


To be continued...

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