Inkitt
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"This story has an amazing plot... Can't wait for the next parts!"

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So far so good

"I really liked the story so far. Although I would like to say that I feel like the side characters lacked detail which makes the story feel slightly rushed. I hope you expand on the side characters too. Take this a little takeaway. (Ps: the story has potential. )"

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Great story!

"Its a nice story i loved it! Keep it up!"

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