What is your opinion?
Exceptional
"This is a truly beautiful story. Your discretions are amazing, allowing the reader to see exactly what you see, in exquisite detail. I love it my dear. Please keep writing, you're truly amazing. I hope there are more chapters to this story, there's so much you can tell us from here. I'd love to know where they go from here, how they go to a beautiful bedroom and make love to each other. How Viv feels about turning to another woman for sex, is it her first time. With 3 kids she's obviously been with a man for awhile, until he got tired of her. Please continue to tell us this story. 💕 "
Brave journey of an overthinker
"This story really resonates. It's a really indepth story about an insecure person. Her journey is a brave one and the weight of all the trauma is prevalent. The plot was good. Writing was greatly detailed but maybe too detailed. There were a lot of paragraphs I skipped over because it was already written in a different way in another chapter. I think it could've been half the length that it was. For instance all the thoughts she had while getting ready were the same thoughts she had while driving to the restaurant. There were really no new thoughts which is typical when overthinking but in a story it could be summarized that she's having her thoughts again in order to not be redundant. I also found it a little funny that the smell of jasmine was EVERYWHERE. "
