What is your opinion?
Great story
"My first story from this author and I’m impressed. There’s a big twist midway and I did not see that coming. Love the writing style and I couldn’t put it down. Wished we could see a little glimpse into their future, possible sexual interactions, but love it nonetheless. "
The Darkness Consumes
"This story was great. I had a hard time putting it down, and the twist towards the middle really surprised me. I loved it."
The darkness consumes
"I loved everything about it "
Book review
"This is one of the most heartfelt stories I have read in a while. Thank you so much for sharing this on here. I LOVE your writing. ...quite immassive... I can't wait for more chapters... Definetly checking your wattpad!"
Viv
"I liked how Ash was always there for Viv..I didn't get it at first but then..I got it...whatever they went through was painful..and really sad..but I'm glad it all worked out in the end"
You got me!
"I LOVE psychological drama especially with BL. It's probably my fav genre and I read quite a bit. I'm really enjoying this story a lot. You even gave a good surprise that I didn't see coming until the final red herring! I like Viv's inner dialogue and his back-and-forth banter with Ash when things get a little too dark. I have trouble with pronouns too...it's so embarrassing! Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work :)"
ONE of my Favs...
"Hey! I always have this constant urge to find a good psychological story—something raw, haunting, and beautiful—and The Darkness Consumes fits that perfectly. I’m hoping the upcoming chapters keep the same depth, because what you’ve written so far is incredibly gripping. I loved reading your descriptions, especially the way you handled Viv’s inner conflicts and emotional chaos. The way you expressed his schizophrenia and turmoil was chilling—it hit deep. Not everyone may relate to it, but I did. And I believe many readers, in one way or another, will find something familiar in his pain, too. It was haunting, and that emotional shock? It reached me. Like—Viv’s breakdowns became mine, and that’s a real testament to your writing. Honestly, I struggle to cry when reading, but somewhere in the middle of your story… I did. And thank you for that. It helped in ways I wasn’t expecting. Your characters are written so well, with real care and layers. Ash and Viv—they’re deep as hell. My favorite is Viv. I even loved his “asshole” behavior because you showed where it was coming from—his past, his pain, his confusion, and that inner monster of his. You made it all make sense. I felt him. I still do. I got emotionally attached to your story because of your themes: depression, mental health, self-harm, ignorance, life inside the ward, and the raw struggles of just existing. All of it was delivered in a way that didn’t feel forced or exaggerated—it just felt real. And okay, last thing: I’m not usually a fan of BL as a genre, mainly because I’ve rarely found stories that feel authentic or not overly dramatic. But yours? It is one of the rare ones. The slow build-up between Ash and Viv felt believable, natural, and very human. It’s one of the reasons I’m loving this story so much. Thank you for writing this. That’s it for my yapping session. Love you and your work. 💜 "
