What is your opinion?
It's really a good story
"It was really good and amazing it was also hooking I loved it. 10/10 you should make even more stories like these their soo good. "
Charming!
"Very charming story with a lot of potential! Cute imagery such as the bunny, fairies, and the elves. Loved the surprise family twist. There is room for improvement, but overall a very well-written fantasy story."
Splendid!
"I love your story. It's so unique and unexpected at every turn. What I love more about it is that it's not even slow paced. Every para is a new adventure. Amazing! Keep up the good work and please keep updating. I can't wait to read the entire story <3"
Stuck in the Immortal World
"I love the imagination of this story, it has a lot of potential. There are places for improvement, for example: There are a lot of symbols in your work instead of just empty space. While it is cute, it could cause the reader to be distracted and unsure where the paragraph actually starts. There's nothing wrong with that, I just think it could use some cleaning up. <3 Some other places could use to be separated from the rest of the paragraph. Like inner thoughts, or when someone else is speaking, would read better if they are new paragraphs A lot like this as an example, I'm excited for this story. I love stories about teleportation or otherwise finding a way to be in a different world. Please keep up the good work. "
loveeee
"I really, really love this book I definitely recommend it to fantasy reader its one of the books that make me feel shocked and I just really love this."
