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Too Good

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More a poem than a book

"I will say, this author has a way with words. The writing isn't bad, and the use of adjectives is clever. The only things that sort of turned me off was the way it was written, more poem than book, and the fact that I got lost a lot as to who was being talked about, or who was doing the talking. It also seems like English isn't the author's first language, so I won't harp on grammar too much, though it can use some improvement to read smoother. If these points are improved on, I think it will make the experience a lot better for readers. "

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