A nice pleasent read with a hint of mystery!

"First of all, the plot has been thought out well. I like the whole 'first kiss whodunit' element. It was a good addition to the story. I hate being harsh to authors but there were places where full stops were missing and capital letters were needed. This knocked off one star for me. My advice for the author would be to go back and proofread it to catch those small little errors. I hope that the author continues with the story as I am excited to see where this will branch out."