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Adventures in Avalore

"We’re only nine chapters in, and it’s already been a wild ride! Avalore is a game world that is well-crafted. It has a certain medieval feel to it, with settings ranging from a cozy tavern to a dangerous cave. Lemonlimeyipes has a flair for describing atmosphere and painting a vivid picture. This story is full of action and banter. The humour is really on point and shines through in every scene, whether it is action-packed or slower-paced. Mira and Lila make a great main pair with a twist, a secret one of them doesn’t know about the other. The supporting cast are a fun bunch, and together they make for a diverse fellowship of adventurers. One of them, Bjorn the dwarf, steals the show with his booming voice and excentric personality, but all of them have their distinct characteristics. Despite this, they mix well together. I'm eager to find out where we’re going to go from here. If you like fantasy that plays with the boundaries between two realities in a fun way, give this story a read. You won’t regret it! "

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