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Ashes of the Crown

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Summary

It’s all fun and games til you accidentally make a wish that changes everything. Right? Avalore is a world within a world. On the outside, life continues as normal. People try to find their way, carve out a future for themselves, get a career, a spouse, maybe have some kids, while some still struggle just to meet their basic needs. However, inside, inside the virtual reality world, they can be whoever they want to be. Mage, thief, dwarf, beastmaster, knight, to name a few obvious possibilities; it seems like there’s something for everyone. Friendships are formed quickly, out of necessity, but some still stubbornly travel alone, perhaps not feeling like they really fit in: that no one would love them, or understand them. People come to this world from all walks of life. Many use it as an escape. But little do they know… it may not be exactly what they expected, and hidden powers are pulling strings they never would have assumed existed. Adventure, camaraderie, perhaps even romance somewhere down the line: Avalore becomes a place where people not only embrace their fantasies, but even discover themselves; parts they never knew, or fully grasped. Will they achieve the growth necessary - not just gaining levels, but strength and insight - to be able to meet all the challenges that are thrown their way? Not just in-game, but in the real world too? As a plot unfolds to obtain a magic crown - a crown offering unmatched power in this new realm - the question quickly arises as to who will be the one to obtain it? And what will be the far-reaching consequences that come from it? Embark on a journey full of humor, growth, and companionship, in Ashes of the Crown.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
20
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: A New Beginning


Mira sat alone at the bar of the bustling tavern, her gaze drifting over the lively crowd. The clink of tankards and the hum of animated conversation filled the air, a stark contrast to the quiet solitude she had grown accustomed to. Her blue mage attire, a deep, midnight blue with intricate patterns of shimmering silver, was a stark reminder of the persona she had chosen to embody in this new virtual world. Mira's eyes, cold and analytical, scanned the room with a mix of curiosity and detachment.


The tavern, named "The Wandering Bard," was a haven for adventurers. Armor-clad figures laughed heartily, their gear glinting with enchantments and expensive craftsmanship. Mira noted the sharpness of their swords, the elegance of their robes, and the vibrant magic that seemed to crackle from their artifacts. It was a far cry from the worn guitar case and meager tips she was accustomed to in her real life.


She sipped her drink, a nondescript concoction that lacked the magic of true enjoyment. Her mind wandered to the life she had left behind—his life—one of constant struggle and dissatisfaction. Living with his parents, pursuing a dream that seemed just out of reach, Vincent Price had created Mira as a way to escape, to find something different in the virtual world of Avalore.


The tavern door creaked open, and a new figure stepped inside. Mira's gaze shifted. The girl who entered was strikingly different from the typical adventurers. Her hair, a curious shade of red, cascaded down her back, and her outfit—a white dress paired with black high-heeled open toe platform boots—was both unique and unconventional. Her blue eyes sparkled with an innocence that seemed almost out of place amidst the rugged adventurers.


Without hesitation, she approached the bar and took the seat next to Mira. The barkeep, a grizzled man with a bushy beard, raised an eyebrow at her choice of drink.


“Hey, can I get some apple juice to go, please?” she asked cheerfully.


The barkeep hesitated for a moment, then broke into a smile. “Sure, miss. On the house.” He turned and poured a glass of cider, sliding it over with a nod. “Enjoy.”


The girl beamed at him. “Thank you so much!” She took a sip, closing her eyes briefly as she savored the taste. “Mmm. It’s good… Thank you again.”


As the barkeep moved away to assist other customers, she turned her attention to Mira. “Hi. My name’s Lila. And yours?”


Mira hesitated, caught off guard by the directness of the question. “I, uh… I’m new here… I just bought this game…”


Lila’s smile widened, an impish glint in her eyes. “Well, that doesn’t answer my question.”


Mira’s lips twitched slightly. “It’s Mira,” she said, her voice softening. “I guess you could say I’m still figuring things out.”


Lila’s eyes sparkled with curiosity. “Well, you’re not the only one. Avalore can be a bit overwhelming at first. If you need any help or just want someone to show you around, I’d be happy to lend a hand.”


Mira looked at Lila, a mix of skepticism and intrigue crossing her features. “Why would you want to help me?”


Lila shrugged lightly. “Why not? It’s always nice to make new friends, especially when you’re new to a place. Plus, it’s more fun exploring with someone else to talk to...”


A silence fell between them, filled only by the distant chatter and the clinking of glasses. Mira’s eyes softened, a glimmer of curiosity getting the better of her.


Mira’s lips twitched slightly. “I guess...”


Lila’s eyes lit up. “Yay! I’m glad. So…where should we go first?”


Mira sighed and shrugged. “I don’t know. You’re the expert. And what’s up with that outfit? You’re gonna get hurt out there, you know.”


Lila blinked, her smile unwavering. “Maybe, but I’ll be okay.”


Mira scoffed. “Yeah? Well… I guess you will be behind me. You’re a red mage, right?”


Lila nodded.


“Well, I’m blue, but I went with tanking gear. Spells too.”


“Oh?” Lila asked.


“Yeah. So you just stay behind me and cast your fireballs or whatever.”


Lila blinked and then smiled. “Oh, um… I only know support spells,” she said shyly.


Mira was stunned, her heart sinking as she froze midway to lifting the glass to her mouth. “What? …Why?”


Lila shrugged. “I just want to help…”


Mira sighed. “What I mean is… If you wanted to play a support role, why didn’t you just pick Cleric or Paladin or something?”


Lila shrugged again. “I have my reasons…”


The conversation hung in the air, charged with a mix of curiosity and uncertainty. Mira felt a pang of disappointment but tried to push past it. As the two began to talk more, the bustling tavern seemed a little less intimidating, and Mira felt a glimmer of possibility in the midst of their new journey; a small one.

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This was a strong opening chapter! You set an intriguing scene at the bar, and there is a plot twist right away, she is a he! So far you’ve established a couple of interesting characters, I can’t wait to follow them on their adventure 🤩

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I have no words. This had a good atmosphere! Soft atmosphere and... hints of the upcoming plot! Moving on to the next chapter!

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