What is your opinion?
High expectations, virtual worlds, and I'm loving every bit of it!
"I've reached chapter 11, and here is my first review, which I'll update as I continue reading! So far, I am absolutely loving the story, and I adore the characters. Not only are they well-defined, but I also love getting to know them better as their adventure goes on. I'm generally not a huge fan of gamers' virtual worlds, but I love the imagination behind this—for example, I kept wondering: is it normal for characters to start a quest and then suddenly change direction? Just a couple of small notes: some of the chapters are quite long, though I don't see any issue with breaking them up. Especially for someone like me who reads before going to sleep: sometimes I can't finish the chapter, and the next day I have to reread it from the beginning or quickly scroll through to remember where I left off 😅. Another thing—I'm not a big fan of excessive spacing between paragraphs, but that's definitely just a personal quirk of mine 🥹. At the beginning, I thought this would just be a story about the 'avatars', but instead I really appreciated the break with the 'return to reality'. It makes me wonder if there will also be a 'parallel' story in the real world, and if and how it will intertwine with the virtual one... I'm also really curious to see how the virtual storyline will progress, and... well, I love it, love it, love it 😍. Just to put a tiny bit of pressure on you, know that I have very high expectations for how the plot develops! 🤭"
Adventures in Avalore
"We’re only nine chapters in, and it’s already been a wild ride! Avalore is a game world that is well-crafted. It has a certain medieval feel to it, with settings ranging from a cozy tavern to a dangerous cave. Lemonlimeyipes has a flair for describing atmosphere and painting a vivid picture. This story is full of action and banter. The humour is really on point and shines through in every scene, whether it is action-packed or slower-paced. Mira and Lila make a great main pair with a twist, a secret one of them doesn’t know about the other. The supporting cast are a fun bunch, and together they make for a diverse fellowship of adventurers. One of them, Bjorn the dwarf, steals the show with his booming voice and excentric personality, but all of them have their distinct characteristics. Despite this, they mix well together. I'm eager to find out where we’re going to go from here. If you like fantasy that plays with the boundaries between two realities in a fun way, give this story a read. You won’t regret it! "
