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The runaway hybrid

"hey, loved this book. I cant seem to find were the comments on my books are going, do you know where to find them?? The book says I have them but I don't know how to get them to read them."

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The Runaway Hybrid

"I enjoyed reading this fast paced short story "

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Slow start

"So far it is very slow. 20 chapters and nothing very important or interesting. Just a fast paced story that needs fleshing out and character building. Close the plot holes (her parents? Their families? Which parent was even which species???) "

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