What is your opinion?
Life without a Memory
"This story is one of a kind. The author's writing style is exceptional. The plot has an unexpected twist which strengthens the storyline. However, I do recommend you make it longer. I know that there are sequels, but I believe that the name of the series should be the title of this book The titles could act like "Parts". This way the novel would be long and detailed. The reason for my opinion is that the ending wasn't much of an ending anyway. It was more of a "Part 1" ending. Other than that, I think the story is impressive."
Stolen Memories
"This book is amazing in the way the author has approached the writing of her main character. Just when you think you know where it is going she throws you a twist you weren’t expected. I hope this author does not make me wait too long for her next book in this series. To rate this book any other way would be down right criminal. Looking forward to finding and reading more of this author’s writings. I will recommend this book to my SciFi circle."
Very interesting short story...I'm sorry it's so short..thank you Writer😍
"Hank you so much for the story..😍😇"
First chapter!
"I'm only on the first chapter and can I just say that I'm very impressed! I love interesting, different writing styles and you definitely have one! Not to mention the plot seems very interesting! I can't wait to read the rest of it, well done!"
Interesting Setup
"I like the start of the story, setting up a story without being able to give the reader any background info is difficult. I felt the characters bitterness in the narrative. The young girl character did not seem consistent, though,. At first she seems to snarl at Jail Girl but then comes across as very innocent later. I liked the first person narrative but was kind of thrown off when the narrator "broke the fourth wall", speaking to me (the reader) as though I were a character in the story. Perhaps that will play out later in the story but for me it was distracting. There were a couple of dropped words but since I'm not a technical guy I really can comment on punctuation, etc. Overall, it's a really interesting start and premise."
