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Zael and henry

"Good story interesting to read. Thanks to author. "

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got me hooked up

"First book I read in the app. I liked the story going back and forth before settling, and I like the way you can see it happening for real! congrats! "

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Fantastic!

"This story was original, thoughtful, and hilarious! The plot is well laid out and the characters are very realistic. A really great read!"

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Wonderful

"This is my first book on this app and I love this novel. The characters and their relationship especially zael and of course henry. I also learned some bits about the LGBTQ community, thank you. "

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The Perfect Lie

"This is a fantastic story about love and acceptance. Zael’s emotional journey to find love was a painful one. His life is great except that his family doesn’t know he’s bi. He can’t find anyone who will give him a chance long enough to fall in love let alone accept his sexuality. Henry is the sweetest person who worries about everything. He has such a beautiful soul and he loves Zael completely. I’m glad they found happiness together. Fantastic job author. 💞🩷💞"

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The Perfect Lie

"Beautiful thought provoking story that you will fall in love with. All people regardless of their gender, color and sexuality are still humans who have a heart and emotions just like anyone else. You'll get to visit all of those feelings in this story and get insight as to how even the littlest words and actions affect others, even if said jokingly."

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wonderfull explanation

"Hey Buddy! Have you ever thought about publishing this story on Kindle or Amazon? The emotional depth, especially that scene between Zael and Juan, feels like something that would really resonate with readers on a wider scale."

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The perfect lie: MC

"This was such a beautiful storie which shows again that one never know when the right person will come along and how complex gender identity can mess up people's relationships. Well done I really enjoyed the story. 🥰🥰🥰"

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Im in tearsssss

"I couldn't finish it last night so i had to leave some last chapters for today It was so beautiful 🥹🥹🥹🥹 i laughed, panicked and cried and felt all the possible emotions through the story i just loved itttt i loved every part of it 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Henry being called Hen hit different and when i read it my heart skipped a beat because i loved this book so much but then i had a lil reminder of my Hen 😭😭😭😭😭 so i got a taste of my all time favorite book and this masterpiece 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🤍🤍🤍🤍 I fucking love youuuuu so much you are amazingggg 🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶"

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Amazing

"Loved this story. Something different which I enjoyed much."

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The Perfect Lie

"After a few chapters I said to my wife that I thought I would not be able to continue reading this story, but carried on. I then read through the night to finish it! What an amazing plot development and I really do appreciate why the earlier activities were necessary. 53 years ago I made the opposite choice, so you will understand why I really enjoyed your story - no surrogates needed. Thank you."

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The heart knows

"It's a very good read. No dull or boring moments. The story flows really good. So far, I love it very much. I hope it will have a good ending though."

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