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Brenda

"Marvelous indeed. Enjoyed it thoroughly "

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Innerworld: A Grand Lights story

"This story made us laugh all the way through, with its delightful hero and intricate characterisations. Rather like the genius Stephen King, the world's best horror writer, this writer can remember his youth and can write about it in a way that genuinely makes his characters believable. Good quality grammar, excellent writing style, and a plot that doesn't disappoint. The only negative thing we can find to say about it is that we think the title could be improved. It's a bit cumbersome and not quite catchy enough. We can recommend this for anyone who doesn't limit their reading to purely erotic romance and sex."

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Tart and satirical

"I was impressed with the narrative of the book. I have only read the first chapter, but it's done wonders for world-building and character development. I would dare say it's more interesting and engaging than the source material. My black mark is only for the extended amount of description. I was hoping that the action would move along a little faster. It's minor, but noticeable. Overall, a terrific read, and I will work my way through the entire book. Great job!"

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Innerworld is a GRAND read!

"Mr. Egan's Innerworld: A Grand light's Story is a remarkably great read. It works on oh so many levels! A wonderful children's story, but one parents will love to read, as it has such depth they can connect to events in our Outerworld today. A wonderful fable, full of mischief, joy, illusion and most of all, love. I highly recommend you give it a read!!!"

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Sat Amazed

"I found myself laughing out loud and enjoying the turn of phrase as much as the story. The fantastic setting is so original, you are totally absorbed by imagining yourself in it. I think this book is as much for adults as it is for children. Great job, J.C. Egan! Would read the series!"

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Wonderful World We Were Wandering..... 5W

"This story took me off my feet into another world. It was as if I was also living inside this book. So breath-taking and heart-touching!! I honestly love this book with all my heart with its veins and arteries!!!! Those who need a touch of fantasy in their life, please read on to this Wunnerful Author's Book.... Hats off to you, J. C. Egan!!!!"

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Great fun

"I laughed. I cried. I fell in love all over again. I read it to my son and he laughed, he cried and he fell in love all over again, too. I tried reading it to my daughter, but she’s just 8 months old and fell asleep. Kudos to Mr. Egan. Great story!"

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Jolly Fun

"J.C. Egan invites you to tumble into his inventive and whimsical rabbit hole in this quirky fantasy with lightness and humor - and substance to boot. His wry, knowing voice mixed with the gentle innocence of the tale creates an interesting texture and satisfying read. (**Bonus** - his female lead is smart *and* funny *and* beautiful (a concept unknown to an appalling number of writers in Hollywood)."

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Imaginative, intelligent and enthralling.

"With a clear voice and forward moving story this fun fantasy bit of fiction is a quick read and well worth it! The author weaves a tapestry of humor with threads of imagination, invention, and excitement. Very enjoyable!"

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A breath of fresh air

"In the world of doom and gloom that we live in - it's nice to spend some time in a book which is pure escapism. This book provided that. Well written with characters that you feel in love for and rooted for and a plot that took you on a ride!"

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A Magical, Humorous, Adventure

"This author truly captured the art of storytelling. Peter's adventure into the Innerworld is reminiscent of those magical moments where one can enter a fairytale world as a real human and meet strangers/creatures of crazy, silly and supernatural powers. He creates real characters that have fun on their journey, and get the chance to be brave, kind, and storytellers, themselves. I highly recommend reading this fantasy tale..........It works well for both kids and adults. This story would make a wonderful fantasy miniseries................so fun! Signed, the girl who would love to resemble "The Beautiful Woman all Dressed in White.""

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hooked

"From the get go I was "had." I loved the process of the writing as the young Potty was thinking and speaking and reasoning. The shift as he matured took some adjusting because I was having such a magical time being a kid. I loved this book as much as the "chronicles." Mr. Egan has delivered quite a story. I will actually read it again. Encourage all to enjoy this book. Grab the first kid you see and read it to them."

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Love it

"Love it. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is ok with you then please email me at exzordsdevs AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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kaking007

"Wonderful story, imaginative, humorous and continually engaging! Characters are well-delveloped, settings are appropriate and detailed. When's his next book coming out?"

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Magical Land...Magical Story

"An imaginative and creative story that everyone can enjoy. Mr. Egan has been able to capture a tone and setting that grabs you and has created characters that you want to know."

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Well done

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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Enjoyable Read

"An enjoyably read that seems childish to start, but grows up with the main character. They writers style was reminiscent of L. Frank Baum's to start with, but the tone and style appeared to change as the story progressed. Entertaining, kept my till the end. I'm interested in seeing more of Mr. Egan's work "

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