1 – Servant’s Son
1 – Servant’s Son
Blue-gray mist pooled like cold silk between weathered stone paths and low training halls, clinging to the edges of lantern light strung beneath the eastern spires. Servants moved through the courtyards first, quiet and precise, lighting incense at the gate pillars and sweeping the previous night’s leaves into neat piles.
No one ran here. Every movement had its rhythm, every person their place. Even the servants knew better than to disrupt the order of the clan.
Amid the morning routine, Jalen Hewitt, a wiry teenager with cedar-toned skin, coarse Riverstone-black hair bound at the nape, and eyes the color of storm-washed earth, carried a heavy crate of pulse stones past the training grounds. His shoulders stiffened beneath the weight, but his breathing remained steady. His worn sandals scuffed softly against the stone as he passed groups of young cultivators practicing beneath the morning mist.
The youths, ranging from thirteen to seventeen, were cousins and distant branches of the Hewitt bloodline. Some traded blows with practice weapons, while others demonstrated their techniques or boasted about their latest breakthroughs. Most remained in the Ruby or Emerald Realms, each divided into Low, Mid, and Peak stages. A few of the older youths had reached Mid-Emerald, their qi stronger than that of their younger peers but still raw and unsteady.
Their training filled the courtyard with bursts of energy, loud boasts, and the occasional clash of practice weapons. They carried themselves with the confidence of their birth, as though the grounds belonged to them—as though their bloodline had carved every stone beneath their feet.
None spared Jalen a second glance.
Why would they? To them, he was useful only when a training mat needed unrolling, a practice blade needed cleaning, or a task required someone they could order around.
He was, after all, the son of a servant.
But it wasn’t always like this.
Fifteen years ago, Jalen’s father, JaQuan Hewitt, had been one of the clan’s most promising young cultivators. His future had seemed limitless.
By eighteen, he had reached the mid-Amethyst Realm, a feat so rare that it changed what the clan thought possible. Most cultivators spent decades, sometimes even a lifetime, trying to reach that level. JaQuan had advanced with a speed that made it seem as though the path had been made for him.
They called him The Wind Blade. The elders praised him, the scribes recorded his achievements, and very important people from the other Nine Great Families regarded him with cautious respect.
Some even whispered that if he reached the Gold Realm before the age of seventy, the Hewitt name would carry greater weight across the Vernon Continent.
As far as anyone knew, no one had ever achieved such a feat. Not within the clan, nor anywhere on the continent. If JaQuan managed it, he would probably be the first.
Then came the League duel against Varec Illume.
JaQuan had been on the verge of victory when his opponent cheated, unleashing a high-grade spirit tool that struck him square in the chest.
His dantian cracked. The spiritual reservoir within him, once a roaring forge of wind qi, fractured and began to leak. He could still feel the energy swirling inside him, but it slipped through his damaged channels like mist through broken glass. He could no longer shape it or give it form.
His cultivation collapsed almost overnight.
He fell from Amethyst to early Ruby, barely able to light a ward, let alone wield one. Once, he could summon blades of wind with a flick of his wrist. Now, even a simple gust left him breathless.
The elders called it a miracle that he had survived. JaQuan saw it as a mockery of everything he had worked for.
The Hewitt family didn’t exile him. They simply moved him aside, quietly and without ceremony.
They gave him a servant’s robe.
He swept the tiles, tended the incense, and stitched torn sleeves. He still bowed to the instructors who had once praised his footwork as though it were poetry.
And Jalen?
He grew into the silence his father had left behind.
When Jalen was six, his father began teaching him the old stances, though he no longer called it training. They traced diagrams in the dirt and practiced breathing patterns beneath the lantern chains along the servants’ walkway. JaQuan watched closely, waiting for some sign of progress.
A shimmer of aura. A flicker of root resonance. Anything to suggest that Jalen’s Ruby-stage awakening had begun.
But nothing came.
By the time Jalen was eight, JaQuan had stopped. The stances and diagrams disappeared, replaced by silence and the quiet acceptance of what he believed his son would never become.
Perhaps he thought he was sparing Jalen the pain of chasing something he could never attain.
He wasn’t.
His father had no idea how far Jalen had progressed. He had already surpassed his peers by a wide margin.
But he kept it a secret, avoiding attention so he could focus on the only things that mattered to him: cultivating and learning.
He practiced alone, watched from the shadows, and spent hours in the clan’s public archive reading scrolls no one thought he’d understand. He chose the quietest hours, when the halls were nearly empty, and used cracked mid-tier spirit stones others had left behind. He repeated his forms until he passed out.
At ten, Jalen began developing his own cultivation method, drawing inspiration not from scrolls or instruction, but from watching the wind. He studied how it came and went without warning, slipped through barriers, stirred leaves, and vanished without a trace.
Eventually, these observations gave birth to the first technique of his Spirit Wind Art, Breath Like Dust, a skill that concealed his cultivation and made his presence difficult to distinguish, like wind moving through cedar or dust drifting beneath lantern light.
With it, Jalen could walk through an active detection field and register no more spirit than a paper doll. He could sit across from a cultivator four stages above him and appear completely inert.
Even then, he had stood within arm’s reach of elders without drawing so much as a raised eyebrow.
Why would he?
To them, he was nothing.
Jalen now stood at the peak of the Diamond Realm, a level that, by cultivation norms, took roughly a hundred and fifty years to reach—if it was reached at all. Yet he had reached the pinnacle of cultivation on the continent months before his fifteenth birthday.
And if this news ever got out, many cultivators who had spent decades shedding blood, sweat, and tears on the path would vomit blood from sheer disbelief. The truth would unravel everything they had built their pride upon. Others would scream fraud, clinging to doctrine like it could shield them from irrelevance.










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