What is your opinion?
Nice!
"This story was short but powerful. It is modern, probably aimed at younger readers. The mysterious, secretive style from the very beginning made me only more and more interested into the story. I could really see the reasons for Mark's fear, disrupt and paranoia. I could not imagine myself in the same place. Mark had so many theories and I believed every one of them. The style of writing is nice and the story is consuming and easy to read. However, I believe that having dialogues would add to the dynamics of the story. I would also suggest further editing and proofreading. The story seems kind of unfinished, though. Overall, I have enjoyed it and would love to read more."
Well done
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