What is your opinion?
Ninja
"Love it wish was more"
Loyality
"Liked the plot but the mafia part was a little off doesn't sound like the mob I knew. The moves that you describe seem confusing an being caught twice in the light on a roof is amateur time never on the high ridge of anything."
Loyal
"It was good"
Kiss ass without the gore
"I enjoyed the story line but I would have liked more background on the villain, what was his ultimate plan and where did he go? I think he should have had a “I’ll be back” moment before the story ended. Boatmanken."
Great story
" I love the concept of the book. You have made a wonderful story. You should have pride in your work. The use of similes is awesome instead of continuously using adjectives. The word choice is amazing and gives vivid description that actually allows me to imagine the action in my mind. I also like the personality of your characters Some things you may want to consider. For some more fruitful and productive writing you should add onomatopoeia to create some jazz to your writing. For example the shattering glass or the helicopters propellers. You should also add some metaphors to the mix instead of using all similes. For the grammar and spelling I gave you four stars. The reason I did this you had some incorrect spelling. For example you spelt her wrong as hr. I also found that you left out some quotation marks. You should continue writing because people all around the world need to see you creativity.👍👍😊😊 "
Love it
"Love it. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is ok with you then please email me at exzordsdevs AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."
LOL!
"I enjoyed seeing Shyla put that kid in his place! I also enjoyed seeing the crowd get excited earlier when quietly excited when she won!"
Kudos for writing such a masterpiece
"Kudos for writing such a masterpiece. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."
First Chapter
"I've read the first chapter! I'm new to your Loyalty book. I like the pacing of the story and where it leads. It's action-themed and the description attracted me to read. Good work. ^.^"
Great story
"Very good action packed story. "
Loyalty
"I like the plot, and I like the characters. Very good story. BUT NOW I WANT SOME ACTION. SO.E BOOM POW POWER. I want a Sprite now."
